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The ambition of a young woman to be wealthy and own a portfolio of properties is stymied by the sudden death of her husband. But she continues to prioritise her need for success and wealth over the welfare of her teenage stepson. Feeling unloved he contemplates suicide. She is failing to reach her goal. From the tangles, bonds and mixed loyalties they find that success is a shared journey.
Your logline really needs to address an action or obstacle with sufficient drama to sustain an entire movie and test your protagonist.
Your logline really needs to address an action or obstacle with sufficient drama to sustain an entire movie and test your protagonist.
See lessAnte la enfermedad mental que sufre su madre, Carlos debe aceptar frecuentes cambios en su identidad para conocerla mejor y cuidar de ella.
Translation via Google: Faced with the mental illness suffered by his mother, Carlos must accept frequent changes in his identity to get to know her better and take care of her. Consider the following: State Alzheimer as the disease. Reader rule: don’t mention character names in a logline if they’reRead more
Translation via Google:
Faced with the mental illness suffered by his mother, Carlos must accept frequent changes in his identity to get to know her better and take care of her.
Consider the following:
State Alzheimer as the disease.
Reader rule: don’t mention character names in a logline if they’re not a real person e.g., Cleopatra.
Is Carlos hiding from a storied past? When mom makes him assume a past identity – this can force him to find his true self.
Add a ticking clock by stating late-stage Alzheimer’s or end-of-life care.
Hope you find this constructive, please forgive any bad translations, keep going!
See lessLeaving a trail of bodies in his wake, a vengeful college student must kill the men who murdered his parents while dealing with a determined government agent who will stop at nothing to catch him.
I get the story from the logline, so that is a plus because sometimes I read a logline and I still have no clue what the story is about. So good job making the story clear. I do think you need one more element or twist in the logline to set this apart from other 'out for vengeance' movies. SomethingRead more
I get the story from the logline, so that is a plus because sometimes I read a logline and I still have no clue what the story is about. So good job making the story clear.
I do think you need one more element or twist in the logline to set this apart from other ‘out for vengeance’ movies.
See lessSomething to make the reader of the logline sit up and take notice. Something to make them think, “Ooh, that’s interesting” (A Hook)