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  1. Posted: January 3, 2022In: Drama

    After signing a deal with the devil, A young egotistical successful musician must get out of his leech music executive’s contract in order to be with the love of his life, and gain back his freedom.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 5, 2022 at 10:21 am

    Leaning towards: “An egocentric musician must escape an enigmatic music execs contract when signing his soul to the Devil” I left the B story (love) out, make this yours, keep going! BTW: check out the 1984 classic “Oh, God! You Devil” for research.

    Leaning towards:
    “An egocentric musician must escape an enigmatic music execs contract when signing his soul to the Devil”

    I left the B story (love) out, make this yours, keep going!
    BTW: check out the 1984 classic “Oh, God! You Devil” for research.

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  2. Posted: December 3, 2021In: Drama

    After he loses all his money in the stock market and Las Vegas, a successful financial advisor has an opportunity to get out of debt—if he facilitates the takeover and dismantling of a friend’s family business.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 4, 2021 at 12:37 am

    Leaning towards: “A bankrupt financial advisor [gambler] must choose between [dilemma 1] and [dilemma 2]” Make this yours, keep going! BTW: I wouldn’t call a financial advisor who went belly-up “successful.”

    Leaning towards:
    “A bankrupt financial advisor [gambler] must choose between [dilemma 1] and [dilemma 2]”
    Make this yours, keep going!
    BTW: I wouldn’t call a financial advisor who went belly-up “successful.”

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  3. Posted: November 26, 2021In: Drama

    An American record producer helps a French pop singer who is a one hit wonder and faded into obscurity by helping her to come to America and gain success.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 1, 2021 at 3:19 am

    Consider the following: What’s the producer's arc? Looking for more than just a pack mule for this singer. Consider strengthening the America or Bust premise by finding a compelling reason why a French singer would risk whatever to seek fortune in American. Examples: “A once-famous OR down-and-out rRead more

    Consider the following:
    What’s the producer’s arc? Looking for more than just a pack mule for this singer.
    Consider strengthening the America or Bust premise by finding a compelling reason why a French singer would risk whatever to seek fortune in American.
    Examples:
    “A once-famous OR down-and-out record producer [comeback GOAL]…” “… French one-hit-wonder …”.
    Both parties can find inspiration in each other for their comeback/seek fortune goal.

    This is your story, hope this helps, take care.

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