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EDITED: Three outlaw sisters hunt for the illegitimate brother set to inherit their dying father’s burgled millions whilst being pursued by a vengeful detective
Why do they need to find him? ?The inheritance consists of stolen money; the sisters are outlaws -- why would they bother with the niceties of the law? ? Aren't they crooked enough to abscond with the inheritance themselves?And why should the audience want to root for outlaws to get the inheritanceRead more
Why do they need to find him? ?The inheritance consists of stolen money; the sisters are outlaws — why would they bother with the niceties of the law? ? Aren’t they crooked enough to abscond with the inheritance themselves?
And why should the audience want to root for outlaws to get the inheritance since it’s ill-gotten gain?
Maybe if this were a comedy about the absurd actions of flawed characters. ?But as a drama? ?I dunno.
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Agreed with DPG.Also, many first time writers like to use descriptions?such as?"...life is thrown into chaos?" as they sound dramatic, however the opposite is true. These kind of descriptions?are generic which makes them dramatic for dramatics sake instead of being dramatic as a result of the situatRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Also, many first time writers like to use descriptions?such as?”…life is thrown into chaos?” as they sound dramatic, however the opposite is true. These kind of descriptions?are generic which makes them dramatic for dramatics sake instead of being dramatic as a result of the situation at hand, therefore it gives the concept a melodramatic feel.
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DylanK The logline I wrote is for the same 1981 film. ?What you cited from IMDB is the blurb. ?Blurbs are targeted at movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted ?at movie makers, the money men and producers who finance and package movie projects. ?Different audiences with different interests. (And althouRead more
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The logline I wrote is for the same 1981 film. ?What you cited from IMDB is the blurb. ?Blurbs are targeted at movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted ?at movie makers, the money men and producers who finance and package movie projects. ?Different audiences with different interests.
(And although ?Mel Gibson was the up and coming star, ?Mark Lee actually had the role of the main character; the film is framed around his story arc.)
Blurbs are designed to tease movie viewers into investing a couple of hours and ?$12-$15 dollars in watching the film. ?Loglines are designed to interest movie makers in investing 2 ?(or more) years of the lives and millions of dollars in producing the film.
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