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A single mom with 4 kids by different fathers tangle in an endless typical chore must choose between her kids and her handyman lover
There is a likability problem with your lead character. Why would we be interested in a woman who would even think about choosing between her children and a love interest.
There is a likability problem with your lead character. Why would we be interested in a woman who would even think about choosing between her children and a love interest.
See lessA young transgender woman must reconcile with her estranged, conservative, mother in order to carry on her sex reassignment surgery in order to be the woman she was meant to be.
He may want his mother to accept him as a woman, but that can't be the only goal for the main character. Once he turns into a she post op, then the mother can be worked on to accept the transformation, therefore whether or not the mother accepts him as he is before he turns into a woman??is not a prRead more
He may want his mother to accept him as a woman, but that can’t be the only goal for the main character. Once he turns into a she post op, then the mother can be worked on to accept the transformation, therefore whether or not the mother accepts him as he is before he turns into a woman??is not a problem or a small one in the grand scheme of things. The stakes seem very low, as the others have mentioned best to connect the mother’s approval to a practical need of great importance to the main character.
See lessA family counselor must conceal her alcoholic secret from her friends and clients over her marriage turning soar.
Best to define when the story starts, for example: After her marriage breaks down, an alcoholic marriage councillor must conceal her divorce from her clients in order to keep her practice.As mentioned the stakes seem a little low, what if she was trying to hide the divorce from her kids in order toRead more
Best to define when the story starts, for example:
After her marriage breaks down, an alcoholic marriage councillor must conceal her divorce from her clients in order to keep her practice.
As mentioned the stakes seem a little low, what if she was trying to hide the divorce from her kids in order to prevent any emotional trauma? This way the stakes characters are personal and not just business.
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