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A high school senior in love with his best friend seeks to redeem himself to her and his friends after neglecting them in the depression of losing them when they all go their separate ways.
Agreed with DPG. Also, the wording is confusing, try to streamline the logline so it describes only the major events in the order they occur.
Agreed with DPG.
Also, the wording is confusing, try to streamline the logline so it describes only the major events in the order they occur.
See lessWanting to be independent of her abusive alcoholic father a teen takes driving lessons with her pensioner neighbour discovery the father figure she needs and caring really means.
After reading this I realized you don't have an inciting incident. You have situation normal (The abusive father) You have an action (Taking driving lessons) But you don't have the incident which drives the teen to go from situation normal to the action.
After reading this I realized you don’t have an inciting incident. You have situation normal (The abusive father) You have an action (Taking driving lessons)
See lessBut you don’t have the incident which drives the teen to go from situation normal to the action.
When an exhausted Driver contemplating a life change, receives an ultimatum to go into work on his day off. He must deal with an assorted bunch of characters, who will shape what direction he will take his life.
What the others wrote. I'll add that the logline needs to describe a starting and ending point, in other words inciting incident and goal. As Richiev wrote, describe his goal in detail. However, also describe? what motivated him to achieve this goal. In this case what specific event motivated him toRead more
What the others wrote.
I’ll add that the logline needs to describe a starting and ending point, in other words inciting incident and goal.
As Richiev wrote, describe his goal in detail. However, also describe? what motivated him to achieve this goal. In this case what specific event motivated him to HAVE to change his life?
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