1. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When major disaster happened where oceans start to boil and everything is falling apart, social climber must reconsider main purpose in life in order to build future based on a new realities.

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    Maybe you meant to say something like this? In a post-apocalyptic world, a social climber finds out his/her life purpose is to build the future. I hope this helps.

    Maybe you meant to say something like this?

    In a post-apocalyptic world, a social climber finds out his/her life purpose is to build the future.

    I hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When an orphaned boy searches through the belongings of his recently deceased parents, he quickly discovers that he had been lied to all his life.

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    Is this what you are trying to achieve? When an orphaned boy searches through his late parent's belongings, he discovers that he had been deceived his entire life. I hope this helps.

    Is this what you are trying to achieve?

    When an orphaned boy searches through his late parent’s belongings, he discovers that he had been deceived his entire life.

    I hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When an elderly father’s health begins to decline, his middle aged son returns to his small hometown to be closer to him in his final days, only to be confronted by the demons of his family’s past, causing him to re-evaluate his relationship with his father.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Something like this maybe? When a middle-aged man returns home to be with his dying father, he is confronted by the demons of the family’s past and must re-evaluate the relationship with his father. I hope this helps. Ben

    Something like this maybe?

    When a middle-aged man returns home to be with his dying father, he is confronted by the demons of the family’s past and must re-evaluate the relationship with his father.

    I hope this helps.
    Ben

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