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First re-write-Aspiring writer is forced to choose between his private and professional life when he has to decide if he is willing to expose his mentor for stealing his breakthrough idea after he discovers that his wife is involved as well
What Richiev said about constructing a genuine dilemma is correct.But loglines are about actions and goals, not about dilemmas. ?Specifically, a logline should be about a goal decided upon, a choice actually made, at the end of the 1st Act. ?The choice may lead to a 2nd or 3rd Act dilemma, but thatRead more
What Richiev said about constructing a genuine dilemma is correct.
But loglines are about actions and goals, not about dilemmas. ?Specifically, a logline should be about a goal decided upon, a choice actually made, at the end of the 1st Act. ?The choice may lead to a 2nd or 3rd Act dilemma, but that is beyond the scope of a logline.
So what does the writer do after making the discoveries about his wife and his mentor?
See lessTHE BEAST OF JAIPUR – When a lonely leper from the Untouchable class in modern day India ‘s only friend – a precocious 8 year old girl – is abducted by an evil supernatural figure and forced into sex slavery, he must overcome his debilitating disease and risk his life to rescue her.
Not sure how one overcomes leprosy, would he not need treatment to be cured? Leprosy is not a character flaw it's a medical condition. Seeing as he is the hero that will save the girl, what character flaw can you give him that will provide him with a good inner journey on his way to achieving his ouRead more
Not sure how one overcomes leprosy, would he not need treatment to be cured?
See lessLeprosy is not a character flaw it’s a medical condition. Seeing as he is the hero that will save the girl, what character flaw can you give him that will provide him with a good inner journey on his way to achieving his outer goal?
The Descent to Madness: When a mad movie director wreaks havoc on the set of his latest passion project, a selfish movie mogul must decide on the future of his legacy or the sanity of his friend.
Agreed with DPG. Also, the connection between the crazy director and movie mogul is unclear. In other words, the causal connection between the events in your story is weak, why must the mogul do what it is he does? Secondly, the stakes seem low, what's the worst that would happen should he fail?
Agreed with DPG.
Also, the connection between the crazy director and movie mogul is unclear. In other words, the causal connection between the events in your story is weak, why must the mogul do what it is he does?
Secondly, the stakes seem low, what’s the worst that would happen should he fail?
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