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When a feisty child psychologist fights the system to save a haunted boy, she crosses red lines but what she learns is as precious as what she gives.
If the story is about the lead character fighting the system, then the incident that sets the story in motion should be something cruel which the system does to the boy. that should be added to the logline. Also, 'system' is impersonal, You should give the "system" a face. A specific person who reprRead more
If the story is about the lead character fighting the system, then the incident that sets the story in motion should be something cruel which the system does to the boy.
that should be added to the logline.
Also, ‘system’ is impersonal, You should give the “system” a face. A specific person who represents all that is wrong with the system.
See lessYOKO – Based on true events – Told from Japanese artist Yoko Ono’s perspective – The story of how she and Megastar John Lennon fell in love in 1966 and the incredibly powerful forces that tried to tear them apart.
Sounds more like a concept right now. A concept that is interesting, mind you. But within an inciting incident, it's hard to imagine the story.
Sounds more like a concept right now. A concept that is interesting, mind you. But within an inciting incident, it’s hard to imagine the story.
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INVINCIBLE -?An obese high school virgin with diabetes who stays home all day and plays online chess hones her powers of telekenisis until one day she's exposed by the CIA and forced to use her power to help them capture a deadly Russian gang of Mind Terrorists
INVINCIBLE -?An obese high school virgin with diabetes who stays home all day and plays online chess hones her powers of telekenisis until one day she’s exposed by the CIA and forced to use her power to help them capture a deadly Russian gang of Mind Terrorists
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