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  1. Posted: May 27, 2017In: Drama

    When inheriting his father’s car, Tom is exposed to all his secrets and while trying to re-establish with his ex-girlfriend, is forced to deal with the consequences of these revelations.

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    Added an answer on May 28, 2017 at 9:52 pm

    Based on the comments above and what I read into your plot, how about: After finding family secrets in his deceased father's car, a bachelor must resolve their horrific outcomes to win back his girl. Not saying mine is good, just?suggesting it as an alternative to trigger lateral thinking.

    Based on the comments above and what I read into your plot, how about:

    After finding family secrets in his deceased father’s car, a bachelor must resolve their horrific outcomes to win back his girl.

    Not saying mine is good, just?suggesting it as an alternative to trigger lateral thinking.

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  2. Posted: May 26, 2017In: Drama

    Two chief divers are called forth to salvage the sunken ships at Pearl Harbor. honor their fallen comrades, and revitalize the fleet to avenge their dead shipmates.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on May 28, 2017 at 8:17 pm

    Agreed with the above.There is no out of the ordinary event that precipitated the story. Pearl Harbour happens before the story starts and is largely unrelated to the divers in any direct sense. Unless, of course, they had framily serving on the ships. Ultimately, the event that starts the story isRead more

    Agreed with the above.

    There is no out of the ordinary event that precipitated the story. Pearl Harbour happens before the story starts and is largely unrelated to the divers in any direct sense. Unless, of course, they had framily serving on the ships. Ultimately, the event that starts the story is them getting the call to do the salvage – just another day on the job for them, after a tragic event to be sure but their job none the less.
    What is it about the call that motivates them, with personal stakes, to have to take action or else?

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  3. Posted: May 23, 2017In: Drama

    In the chaotic, deadly days after Pearl Harbor, the War Dept. seeks technically skilled and experienced divers to help with recovery of ships and personnel. Two Chief Divers are called forth, both with intimate knowledge of their ship and crew, the USS Arizona.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on May 25, 2017 at 4:27 pm

    This is a statement, not a plot description. Who is the main character? What is their goal? And what is their motivation?

    This is a statement, not a plot description. Who is the main character? What is their goal? And what is their motivation?

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