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  1. Posted: September 2, 2017In: Drama

    After being revived from a near drowning, a conservative Christian teen must endure being tormented by an evil dwarf-like creature when his mother doesn’t believe him. (26)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 7, 2017 at 5:08 am

    Billy14:IMHO: The theodicy of the Book Job was a hard sell when it was originally written way ?back when -- which is why a ?"happy ending" chapter was tacked on. ?Otherwise, the book would not have made the cut, been included in the official canon. ?(I write this as someone who has spent no small meRead more

    Billy14:

    IMHO:
    The theodicy of the Book Job was a hard sell when it was originally written way ?back when — which is why a ?”happy ending” chapter was tacked on. ?Otherwise, the book would not have made the cut, been included in the official canon. ?(I write this as someone who has spent no small measure of time pondering the dialectics of the book.)

    It’s an even harder sell today in the era of feel good, ?I’m OK, You’re OK, prosperity religion. ?And your theodic theme is not made easier to sell by afflicting an innocent teen with the contrivnace of a malevolent dwarf-like creature. ?Especially when there are so many real life options (incurable diseases, inherited disablities, natural disasters, accidents) with which to unjustly, unfairly torment the kid.

    I just don’t see the ?market for the concept. ?I could be wrong and if you can prove me so, more power to you. ?And I will be the 1st one in the ticket line to see the movie.

    IMHO

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2017In: Drama

    When allegations prompt a rising Senior to permanently leave home, he must feign loyalty to a commune that hides him so he can attain residency there and take his GED.

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2017 at 4:42 am

    >>We?ve seen that quite a bit.Not convincingly, imho. ?Whatever.If you wish to portray him as initially faking it, will he become drunk on the power his charisma gives him over the commune? ?Again, what is his character vulnerability, his personal psychological Achilles heel, ?being exposed byRead more

    >>We?ve seen that quite a bit.

    Not convincingly, imho. ?Whatever.

    If you wish to portray him as initially faking it, will he become drunk on the power his charisma gives him over the commune? ?Again, what is his character vulnerability, his personal psychological Achilles heel, ?being exposed by hanging around in the commune? ?What is the story about his character that you propose to tell by dropping him into this context? ?What is the audience supposed to worry about?

    It seems to me like ?the cards are stacked in his favor during his layover in the commune. ?When the cards should be stacked against him. ?I don’t see anything to worry about. ?Just saying.

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2017In: Drama

    When faced with life as a sharecropper, a young girl decides to run away and pursue her dream of becoming a musician.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 7, 2017 at 1:51 am

    Don't have your logline assume that being a musician is the "most difficult" thing to accomplish. She can always work in the music industry and be a musician, just not on the level as say Beyonce or someone famous -- add famous into the logline -- that may help.Let's say you add in that she is a shaRead more

    Don’t have your logline assume that being a musician is the “most difficult” thing to accomplish. She can always work in the music industry and be a musician, just not on the level as say Beyonce or someone famous — add famous into the logline — that may help.

    Let’s say you add in that she is a sharecropper and is also DEAF — now, you’ve staked up the obstacle with a simple disability.

    A deaf woman runs away from…. to become a musician.

    Now, everything we need to know about this task of hers is front and center. How can she overcome those immense odds?

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