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Due to IVF and genetic changes humanity only exist in the future as twins or multiple births. A self-proclaimed leader decides that the natural balance has to be restored by what he calls natural selection. The tormented genius ?Daggy? Pollux fights against the execution of his love interest who’s been selected as the weaker one.
Agree with Nir Shelter.? The more interesting conflict is between the twins.? I suggest focusing on that.
Agree with Nir Shelter.? The more interesting conflict is between the twins.? I suggest focusing on that.
See lessRealizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity, due to competition with his arch nemesis. A young successful fashion marketer contracts a plan to steal one of his high ranked female supermodels in order to boost his sales, only to grow unexpected feelings that could lead him into losing his business as a whole.
5 words can replace your first 9 for economy: To save his failing company, a young fashion marketer exploits a supermodel that he ultimately falls in love with and must decide between the future of his company and their happiness together. Somewhat shorter.
5 words can replace your first 9 for economy:
To save his failing company, a young fashion marketer exploits a supermodel that he ultimately falls in love with and must decide between the future of his company and their happiness together.
Somewhat shorter.
See lessFueled by a childhood experience with a haunted house, a passionate paranormal believer and her lifelong best friend use their extensive knowledge of scary movies to help clients solve their own paranormal problems.
You shouldn't use backstory as your inciting incident. It is not immediate enough.Think about Supernatural, the two brothers have a backstory that's important to the overall story, but it is the immediate supernatural murder of the girlfriend that sets the story in motion. Also, they have a specificRead more
You shouldn’t use backstory as your inciting incident. It is not immediate enough.
Think about Supernatural, the two brothers have a backstory that’s important to the overall story, but it is the immediate supernatural murder of the girlfriend that sets the story in motion.
Also, they have a specific goal; find their father.
So what is the immediate incident that sets the story in motion?
See lessWhat’s the lead characters specific goal; as set into motion by the inciting incident?