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  1. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Drama

    LOYAL ENEMIES: A slick grifter uses his sexuality to convince a wealthy, lonely socialite to back him in a high stakes poker game. He soon finds the deck stacked against him.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on March 20, 2018 at 11:45 am

    An ageing gigolo con man who plays a naive socialite to finance his last chance at the big shot has been done to death. Spoiler Alert: It never ends well for him.One of my favourite movie about a chancer who uses his roguish charm to climb the social ladder, before falling in love with his target anRead more

    An ageing gigolo con man who plays a naive socialite to finance his last chance at the big shot has been done to death. Spoiler Alert: It never ends well for him.

    One of my favourite movie about a chancer who uses his roguish charm to climb the social ladder, before falling in love with his target and ending up rejected is?Barry Lyndon. That movie was superb for his time. The soundtrack is really the thing that transform that movie into a great melancholic tragedy.

    Anyway, personally I would flip the script. Make the naive socialite the main character. She is new and introduced to a world of shark. Will she sink or swim? Her “loss of innocence” journey seems to have more mileage. A good movie on that very theme is?House of Games,?a well known David Mamet movie.
    It flips the script in the sense that the initially naive psychologist finally reveals herself to be a thrill seeking sociopath.

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Drama

    A private investigator who tracks people by dowsing must protect the man a vicious client hires him to find, as they may hold a clue to the origin of his abilities.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on March 20, 2018 at 10:30 am

    When a private investigator with paranormal ability is hired by a vicious Mafia boss to track a fugitive, he then vows to help the man in exchange for information on his own origin.

    When a private investigator with paranormal ability is hired by a vicious Mafia boss to track a fugitive, he then vows to help the man in exchange for information on his own origin.

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2018In: Drama

    After a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on March 20, 2018 at 5:52 am

    I agree that It is unimportant to know why the dancer lost the competition from the Logline. My objective was just to explain why she would hire a skilled MMA fighter. A dancer is about grace and fluidity, clearly not something you associate with a street brawler. Your hook is that she is hiring somRead more

    I agree that It is unimportant to know why the dancer lost the competition from the Logline. My objective was just to explain why she would hire a skilled MMA fighter. A dancer is about grace and fluidity, clearly not something you associate with a street brawler.
    Your hook is that she is hiring somebody unexpected to win that challenge. However in the concept of the Logline, that hook has to lead to a “why not, I dig that” reaction rather than a “wtf, that does not make sense” reaction. ?You don’t want your Logline becoming a meme. why not hire a plumber or a skydiver?

    You need something in your Logline to tell that hiring that skilled street fighter makes sense.

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