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A jailed former wrestler, gets another chance in the spotlight by putting on wrestling shows in prison, but after his early parole, he struggles to cope without it.
I like the story. I would pinpoint a struggle.
I like the story. I would pinpoint a struggle.
See lessWhen his unknown opponent suffers a brain haemorrhage in the ring at a local tournament, a rookie fighter must discover the boxer’s identity and find his family to gift his prize money to them.
There seems to be a disconnect between the character development and the outer goal. In most good stories the MC needs to overcome a character flaw, this process will make up the inner journey as a pre request for achieving the outer journey goal. In other words, your protagonist needs to change asRead more
There seems to be a disconnect between the character development and the outer goal. In most good stories the MC needs to overcome a character flaw, this process will make up the inner journey as a pre request for achieving the outer journey goal. In other words, your protagonist needs to change as a person before he can give them the prise money.
What character flaw does he have? How will he change?
This may seem like a small issue, but in this kind of story, you need a good inner journey. Otherwise, you’ve got a good guy doing a good thing with little to no obstacles – no conflict and no drama.
See lessAfter the death of his wife, a control freak juggles raising his 2 year old son, managing his successful business, and protecting his friendship with his best friend who moves in to help.
Needs a clear goal, even if it seems small - the point is that it acts as a focus, doesn't need to be earth shattering.
Needs a clear goal, even if it seems small – the point is that it acts as a focus, doesn’t need to be earth shattering.
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