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A broken woman finds herself married to a highly respected deacon, but must now escape a life of abuse and ultimately find her own true spiritual identity.
The story concept is good.And this logline attempt is better than the last, more condensed.However, does the story begin with the lead character leaving the well-respected decon (and the story is about the lead character finding herself?)or does the story end with her finally calling it quits on herRead more
The story concept is good.
And this logline attempt is better than the last, more condensed.
However, does the story begin with the lead character leaving the well-respected decon (and the story is about the lead character finding herself?)
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An awkward pre teen girl tries desperatley to survive her middle school years despite the fact that her home life is utterly unstable. She lives in poverty with a drug addicted, bipolar, suicidal mother who continually bounces from husband to husband with no regard for her children.
Think of the emotional heart of this story and you will be on steady ground. ?You will also be able to write a more concise logline. What do you see as the reasons she is desperate to fit in? How will it effect her if she doesn?t? ?You could also link it to an event, unless it is a logline for a serRead more
Think of the emotional heart of this story and you will be on steady ground. ?You will also be able to write a more concise logline.
What do you see as the reasons she is desperate to fit in? How will it effect her if she doesn?t? ?You could also link it to an event, unless it is a logline for a series.
An awkward girl from a horribly dysfunctional family is desperate to find her place in middle school after the only positive thing in her life, her best friend leaves.
See lessA young broken girl, released from an orphanage, finally found the love and acceptance she only dreams of when she marries a respected deacon only to discover she and her children are in the fight of their lives to escape a secretly abusive husband and to ultimately find her own true spiritual identity. BTW – This is a re-write from 2 days ago.
Loglines are designed to give a quick overview of the basic premise and genre, therefore, they provide a brief statements of the main character and major plot beats - inciting event, action and goal. Checkout the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information.
Loglines are designed to give a quick overview of the basic premise and genre, therefore, they provide a brief statements of the main character and major plot beats – inciting event, action and goal.
Checkout the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.
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