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  1. Posted: April 14, 2019In: Drama

    Upon realising he has a super-fan, the emotionally volatile singer of a struggling band initially feels flattered; but he allows this feeling to darken into something obsessive and unhealthy as he and the fan begin an illicit dance of mutual shadowing, pursuing each other without ever actually meeting. So when the fan’s interest begins to wane, her happiness and the wellbeing of those around her is threatened by his unwillingness to give up her adoration.

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    Added an answer on April 15, 2019 at 5:05 am

    I think Richiev is on the right tack, but this being the age of the internet:When her fansite for her favorite band goes viral, an obsessive teen finds herself being stalked by the emotionally unstable lead singer.(22 words)This is predicated on the assumption that? the story entails a? pas de deuxRead more

    I think Richiev is on the right tack, but this being the age of the internet:

    When her fansite for her favorite band goes viral, an obsessive teen finds herself being stalked by the emotionally unstable lead singer.
    (22 words)

    This is predicated on the assumption that? the story entails a? pas de deux of two quasi-OCD people? She starts out as obsessed with the band as he becomes with her.

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2019In: Drama

    The true story of a widow driven to battle social and governmental forces for her profoundly disabled young daughter?s equal rights, rises to become an esteemed advocate as she spearheads implementing the statewide model residential training program for intellectually challenged citizens being transferred from deplorable institutions into community settings.

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    Added an answer on April 8, 2019 at 5:16 am

    It's subject matter that will resonate with lots of folks.? But it's way to long.? Boil it down to Protagonist, Antagonist (or problem) and the goal.? Beyond those three things, in as succinct a way as possible.

    It’s subject matter that will resonate with lots of folks.? But it’s way to long.? Boil it down to Protagonist, Antagonist (or problem) and the goal.? Beyond those three things, in as succinct a way as possible.

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  3. Posted: March 28, 2019In: Drama

    After an inexplicable resurrection following her ?end-of-life? party, a terminally ill matriarch returns to her grieving family with a primal hunger ? and begs them to kill her before the murderous urge takes control.

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    Added an answer on March 28, 2019 at 8:52 am

    I find it odd that the murderous grandma is the lead character. You would think the lead character would be one of the family members who must stop her. As for the story, I think this is an interesting set-up. I could see this as a single location story. Where the family members are called to a mystRead more

    I find it odd that the murderous grandma is the lead character. You would think the lead character would be one of the family members who must stop her.

    As for the story, I think this is an interesting set-up. I could see this as a single location story. Where the family members are called to a mysterious mansion out in the middle of nowhere. They think their grandma is going to die but she turns into a werewolf or some other creature and kills them one by one until the lead character finally stops her.

    However as dpg pointed out, there does seem to be some logic flaws to the premise. But if the story is good some of those logic flaws can be explained away or forgiven.

    But the logline does need some work.

    Possible title: To Grandma’s House We Go

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