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When an ambitious young basketball player decides to boost his exposure, by accepting an invitation to host a hip hop music award show. He risks his million dollar career, when inadvertently exposing the winner for best performer as a plagiarist.
"When he accidentally exposes a powerful Grammy winner as a plagiarist on live TV an ambitious rising star athlete must..." (Then tell us what they must do)
“When he accidentally exposes a powerful Grammy winner as a plagiarist on live TV an ambitious rising star athlete must…” (Then tell us what they must do)
See lessWhen his wife leaves him and his world falls apart, a depressed control-freak attempts to tie up all the loose ends in his life and with those he cares about as he plans his own suicide
Frankly, I have mixed and messy emotions about the premise.? (I've worked on a suicide hotline.) That said,? more power to you if you can play it for laughs.? However, I think a reader needs a clear signal that it's a dark comedy.?? I suggest "his world falls apart" needs to be fleshed out a bit.? MRead more
Frankly, I have mixed and messy emotions about the premise.? (I’ve worked on a suicide hotline.)
That said,? more power to you if you can play it for laughs.? However, I think a reader needs a clear signal that it’s a dark comedy.?? I suggest “his world falls apart” needs to be fleshed out a bit.? Maybe something like:? “When a control freak loses his wife, job, and home and his pet potbelly pig in one week, he…”
Or maybe he loses everything but his pet potbelly pig (that could have been the coup de gras wedge issue between him and his ex) and his objective goal is to find a good for the pet it before he commits suicide.? (And, of course, nobody want the pet.)
Whatever. Good luck.
See less(Revision #3) It’s 1963. A naive teenager and her older sister, sibling rivals who argue over everything, go to an all-night party that sets them on the path to a singing career. They secure a recording contract, but soon discover that the rock’n roll lifestyle is a roller coaster lifestyle of extreme highs and tragic lows.
In drama, the bad gals and guys get all the lucky breaks; the good gals and guys get none-- they have to earn their success the old fashioned way, through hard work and perseverance..? Yet in this scenario, the girls seems to get the luck breaks, success is handed to them on a silver platter.? ThereRead more
In drama, the bad gals and guys get all the lucky breaks; the good gals and guys get none– they have to earn their success the old fashioned way, through hard work and perseverance..? Yet in this scenario, the girls seems to get the luck breaks, success is handed to them on a silver platter.? There is nothing to indicate they earned success on their own merits, by their own efforts.
Further, there is nothing new in a story of a career that is a roller coaster ride of highs and lows.? That’s SOP for just about every movie ever made about the rise and fall and rise and fall of? musician.
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