1. Posted: October 25, 2019In:

    An ex-con travels back to his hometown to kill a reformed child molester only to fall in love with the man’s protective sister.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Thanks guys. I've started working on an outline for this one... Also, new logline: An ex-con, out to kill a reformed paedophile, falls for the man's protective sister. Richiev: I'm thinking the ex-con was molested as a child and having this reformed paedophile next door conjures up some old demons.Read more

    Thanks guys. I’ve started working on an outline for this one…

    Also, new logline:

    An ex-con, out to kill a reformed paedophile, falls for the man’s protective sister.

    Richiev:

    I’m thinking the ex-con was molested as a child and having this reformed paedophile next door conjures up some old demons.

    More so, it’s interesting because both the ex-con (who as a result of his own molestation, had a lot of anger issues and thus ruined his life, going in and out of prison, etc.) and the reformed paedophile are both trying to get on with their lives and move on.

    Scott:

    Thus far, the ex-con returns home. He reunites with family and friends – all of which still see the “old” him/no believes he can change for the better.

    The ex-con gets a meet cute with the sister – a woman who is very selfless, forgiving, and believes we can change for the better (as the film progresses – her faith in people is tested.)

    The ex-con, finds out about the reformed paedophile next door (a recluse living in fear) and this conjures up some bad dreams/demons. After a fight with his family, and a few drinks, he decides to get rid of these demons by killing this man. (And perhaps even going back to prison.)

    He marches over to next door. Gun hidden in his jacket. And opening the door is… the sister.

    After that – I’m not giving anymore away ha.

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  2. Posted: October 25, 2019In:

    As she attempts another comeback, a bottom of the bottle b list movie queen recounts her rise to the top.

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    dpg Singularity

    A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she's been in the past.Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline shouldRead more

    A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she’s been in the past.

    Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline should be framed in terms of and focus on her future goal, her struggle for a comeback.

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  3. Posted: October 25, 2019In:

    A playwright in desperate need of a hit, must seize back control of his play, after his ex-wife, an egomaniac actress, takes over to direct.

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    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Second one: A workaholic playwright, in desperate need of a hit, must seize back control of his play, after his ex-wife, a control freak actress, takes over to direct.

    Second one: A workaholic playwright, in desperate need of a hit, must seize back control of his play, after his ex-wife, a control freak actress, takes over to direct.

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