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When a young woman falls in love with a pet shop worker, she must escape her animal cult family.
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don't get it. I think? you should write the protagonist's risk, for example: ... She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped. (sorry for my english,Read more
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don’t get it.
See lessI think? you should write the protagonist’s risk, for example: … She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped.
(sorry for my english, It is not very good)
when his highschool bully returns, a stuck-in-home-town loser must prove his competence by kicking his ass in the duel he proposed and save his family name
Suggestion:? the inciting incident is the new girl in town whom he falls in love with.? So he has to stand up to the bully -- instead of run away -- if he's going to impress her. "Whatever a man does, he does for his ideal woman." -- George Balanchine fwiw
Suggestion:? the inciting incident is the new girl in town whom he falls in love with.? So he has to stand up to the bully — instead of run away — if he’s going to impress her.
“Whatever a man does, he does for his ideal woman.” — George Balanchine
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See lessWhen his uncle and Stepfather want a new council building, the council lawyer to impress his Mafia uncle and take over his uncle?s mafia empire , introduces parking fines but he must deal with an irate customer and his computing hacking stepbrother who by interfering with his plans threatens to make him look incompetent.
>>>introduces parking fines but he must dealAs the municipal council lawyer, he can only recommend.? The majority of the council has to approve.And parking fines are small potatoes, pocket change? when compared to the money his uncle must be racking in by the regular rackets.? Even as a comRead more
>>>introduces parking fines but he must deal
As the municipal council lawyer, he can only recommend.? The majority of the council has to approve.
And parking fines are small potatoes, pocket change? when compared to the money his uncle must be racking in by the regular rackets.? Even as a comedy, I fail to see how this is enough to impress his uncle,? tap him as his successor.
And isn’t it an “irate citizen”? rather than “irate customer”?
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