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A man goes to a class reunion his high school classmate he pined for only to find out she became famous.
Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck
Hi tony18,
This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
1- Correcting grammar/spelling
2- Use the logline “generator”
and/or
3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.
Good Luck
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It's a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn't win?
It’s a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn’t win?
See lessA transgender young woman has to dress up as a man to rejoin a boy band she was fired from.
Is there any reason as to why she does this? Structure: A [what] young woman [must] dress up as a male to join a boy band [because why]. Comedy loglines work best if there is a sense of irony included, so for example, "a transgender woman must dress up as a new man in order to rejoin the boy band shRead more
Is there any reason as to why she does this?
Structure: A [what] young woman [must] dress up as a male to join a boy band [because why].
Comedy loglines work best if there is a sense of irony included, so for example, “a transgender woman must dress up as a new man in order to rejoin the boy band she was fired from,” would work a bit better because the irony of one turning transgender – only to subsequently pretend to be the gender they were born as – subtly hints at the stakes of the story.
Find something that suits your character so that it can help juxtapose against the grain of your premise. Just remember that stakes are a must for loglines, whereas irony is a key to comedy.
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