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William Shakespeare awakens to find himself in London in 2019 with no memory of anything after 1616. Interpreting modern day situations from an Elizabethan perspective, he befriends three school children in an attempt to understand to the 21st century.
Agree with ssk05032.? What are the stakes?? In comedy, there has to be stakes, too.? What is his real dramatic problem?? Shakespeare was a genius; surely if anyone could overcome the initial disorientation and come to understand and operate in modern times, it would be Shakespeare.? And why would heRead more
Agree with ssk05032.? What are the stakes?? In comedy, there has to be stakes, too.? What is his real dramatic problem?? Shakespeare was a genius; surely if anyone could overcome the initial disorientation and come to understand and operate in modern times, it would be Shakespeare.? And why would he rely on kids and not adults to coach him? After the “fun and games” of Shakespeare’s initial disorientation wears off, what’s the story?
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This logline is a little confusing, I would take out '1983' because as written it reads as if the story takes place in 1983. However after reading this a couple times I don't think that is when the story takes place.
This logline is a little confusing, I would take out ‘1983’ because as written it reads as if the story takes place in 1983.
However after reading this a couple times I don’t think that is when the story takes place.
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Your logline has a lead character, goal, conflict and a hook as well. I wouldn't change very much about this logline. (Think of it as minor tweeking if you decide to change something)
Your logline has a lead character, goal, conflict and a hook as well. I wouldn’t change very much about this logline. (Think of it as minor tweeking if you decide to change something)
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