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When a group of vigilante paedophile hunters attempt to capture their latest target, they discover the limitations of their unprofessional crusade.
This sounds great. However consider that it's already understood that they're 'unprofessional' by virtue of them being vigilantes. Maybe they 'find themselves trapped in a world of..' or 'meet their match in the criminal underworld..' or something like that.
This sounds great. However consider that it’s already understood that they’re ‘unprofessional’ by virtue of them being vigilantes.
Maybe they ‘find themselves trapped in a world of..’ or ‘meet their match in the criminal underworld..’ or something like that.
See lessTwo goofballs Navy seals go back in time to Valley Forge and try and help out George Washington.
What do they help GW do!?
What do they help GW do!?
See lessA young woman, with the aid of her odd-ball friends learns to love life again after heartbreak.
In addition to savinh0's comment, what does she stand to lose if she fails? What are the stakes? What's getting in her way? Who or what antagonistic forces are working against her? We have to understand WHY we need to care enough about this character. As it currently stands, this is every film aboutRead more
In addition to savinh0’s comment, what does she stand to lose if she fails? What are the stakes? What’s getting in her way? Who or what antagonistic forces are working against her? We have to understand WHY we need to care enough about this character. As it currently stands, this is every film about a break up. What sets yours apart from every other? In other words, what’s your hook?
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