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A young software programmer builds a loving avatar, which is the complete opposite of his personality. When this avatar frees a beautiful woman from her captors, embezzes a casino, and circumvents national security, he decides it’s time to cross the border: just have to try not to get killed on the way.
Oscuro, how does this digital avatar free a captive, or do any of these things being stuck in a computer? Thanks.
Oscuro, how does this digital avatar free a captive, or do any of these things being stuck in a computer?
Thanks.
See lessWhen humanity decides to commit planetary suicide to escape the woes of post-apocalyptic life, a team is assembled to infiltrate and defeat the terrorist militia group standing in the way of nuclear self-annihilation.
I get this in a “The Dead Don’t Die” dark humor kind of way and DIG IT. Your right this is a fun one, I workshopped your elements then tried to add humor; I am sure DPG will tell me if I got it right or not 😉 (big fan brother!) Added focus to the vastness of Humanity, leaning towards: “Being done wiRead more
I get this in a “The Dead Don’t Die” dark humor kind of way and DIG IT. Your right this is a fun one, I workshopped your elements then tried to add humor; I am sure DPG will tell me if I got it right or not 😉 (big fan brother!)
Added focus to the vastness of Humanity, leaning towards:
“Being done with post-apocoliptia NATO seeks the help of an ex-zombie hunter to kill the “terrorists” standing in the way of nuclear self-annihilation”
Take care.
See lessCan a simple minded accountant, even outwit a butterfly, let alone learn something, when he attends a day long workshop on pet zombie care, given by a snide mysterious intellectual snob.
If the lead character is smart enough to be an accountant I am sure he is capable of doing a one day workshop on zombie wrangling. 1: Your character should have a dream or goal which makes this class important to him. Maybe he has always dreamed of being a zombie wrangler. 2: Your story should haveRead more
If the lead character is smart enough to be an accountant
I am sure he is capable of doing a one day workshop on zombie wrangling.
1: Your character should have a dream or goal which makes this class important to him. Maybe he has always dreamed of being a zombie wrangler.
2: Your story should have recognizable stakes. If he fails what he will lose? Will he… a. get fired, b. fail to reach his dream, c. Be eaten by zombies? What are the stakes?
3: I would avoid writing loglines in the form of a question.
This idea is different, a series of pieces I have not seen put together in this particular way before. Forrest Gump meets the Walking Dead.
So the story is original but I think you might give the logline another try.
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