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When a would-be comic peers into a shrink’s patient files to get new comedy material, he gets himself and the shrink he loves into a lot of trouble.
As FFF said.A logline's target audience is movie makers.? A teaser or blurb's target audience is?movie viewers.? Different markets requiring different strategies.The concept has a lot of potential.? But what's the twist?? What's the unintended consequences?? What's the blowback that happens becauseRead more
As FFF said.
A logline’s target audience is movie makers.? A teaser or blurb’s target audience is?movie viewers.? Different markets requiring different strategies.
The concept has a lot of potential.? But what’s the twist?? What’s the unintended consequences?? What’s the blowback that happens because of his purloining?? What’s the inevitable and well-deserved retribution for exposing and exploiting the private problems of other people?
See lessAn alien woman comes to earth to mate with a deadbeat stoner. Only one thing stands in her way…a psychotically jealous, nut-job girlfriend.
I'm left questioning who the psychotic girlfriend belongs to. Is it one that followed the alien or the man's girlfriend that leaves one questioning why he has this girlfriend.
I’m left questioning who the psychotic girlfriend belongs to. Is it one that followed the alien or the man’s girlfriend that leaves one questioning why he has this girlfriend.
See lessAfter leaving prison, two aging con men go straight by opening a coffee shop but get pulled into mob-like turf war with the other caf?s in a small seaside town.
Excellent. It clearly states the protagonist, their goal and the obstacles in their way. It definitely intrigues one to imagine the different scenarios, even comedic that can arise from the situation. One can wonder, that is what one wants the reader to do, how they will be challenged and how they wRead more
Excellent. It clearly states the protagonist, their goal and the obstacles in their way. It definitely intrigues one to imagine the different scenarios, even comedic that can arise from the situation. One can wonder, that is what one wants the reader to do, how they will be challenged and how they will survive. If your aim is to have them running all the mafias (the opposite of their goal),? then you should include this as the main twist and conclusion to the story.
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