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After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.
After his terminally ill(,) and clinically dead bitch of a wife(,) miraculously revives (herself), a depressed man must find a way to (break) free of his life long commitment. Marked typos, and a recommendation, with (), otherwise sounds fantastic.
After his terminally ill(,) and clinically dead bitch of a wife(,) miraculously revives (herself), a depressed man must find a way to (break) free of his life long commitment.
Marked typos, and a recommendation, with (), otherwise sounds fantastic. See less
After forgetting to bring Vegemite a group of tourists in the Australian bush land are set upon by carnivorous drop bears and must find a way to survive.
I am an Aussie and this can't be a real post. Possibly a hangover from Australia Day.
I am an Aussie and this can’t be a real post. Possibly a hangover from Australia Day.
See lessTwo dim-witted best friends battle the internet and their conservative town to keep their porn shop open.
Hi CLSmith, Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though. An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop? And maybe considerRead more
Hi CLSmith,
Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though.
An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop?
And maybe consider making the “internet” and conservative town into one antagonistic force or entity. Like a technophobe Mayor who’s determined to quell your MCs’ internet erotica endeavors.
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