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  1. Posted: November 13, 2017In: Comedy

    When a devoted wife attends her high school reunion alone, a former classmate’s misspoken phrase triggers her alter ego as an elite assassin. Her husband/handler must intervene or there won’t be another reunion.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 11:02 pm

    I think the logline should be framed and focused around the hook, the attention grabber.? ?And the person in the driver's seat of the story.The hook is what the? wife does, not the husband.? And she is clearly in the driver's seat of the story.? If she doesn't go into assassination mode, then the huRead more

    I think the logline should be framed and focused around the hook, the attention grabber.? ?And the person in the driver’s seat of the story.

    The hook is what the? wife does, not the husband.? And she is clearly in the driver’s seat of the story.? If she doesn’t go into assassination mode, then the husband has nothing to do (of dramatic interest).? There no story, no film.

    What the wife does is the sizzle that? sells the concept.? Not what the husband does.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: November 12, 2017In: Comedy

    (short script) When a pair of bumbling friends encounter a moody Princess, one of them makes sure that she is given a lesson in humility.

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    Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 10:52 am

    You wrote "...I fucking love it! Don?t listen to the whiny voices!!..." and voted your own obscure comment as 'Best comment'. Are you seriously complementing yourself or were these jokes?

    You wrote “…I fucking love it! Don?t listen to the whiny voices!!…” and voted your own obscure comment as ‘Best comment’.

    Are you seriously complementing yourself or were these jokes?

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  3. Posted: November 8, 2017In: Comedy

    When a genie in a pill bottle grants him his wish to be an action hero, a meek civil servant suffering from high anxiety must survive his mundane day job that magically transformed into a series of spectacular action sequences.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 11, 2017 at 9:12 am

    It occurs to me that? the genie can't just pitch spectacular action sequences at the worker and, voila!, he instantly becomes a super hero who knocks them out of the park. The genie also has to endow him with commensurate super hero powers to meet the challenges.? What are those super powers?

    It occurs to me that? the genie can’t just pitch spectacular action sequences at the worker and, voila!, he instantly becomes a super hero who knocks them out of the park. The genie also has to endow him with commensurate super hero powers to meet the challenges.? What are those super powers?

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