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To make his life-long dream of becoming a detective a reality, an impulsive and excitable cop must escort a convict on his “Dead Man’s Day”, a day of chaperoned freedom for death row inmates before their execution. His calculated ward, though, will stop at nothing to avenge the man he was framed for killing.
Hi phatiusmcdoogal, Below is my understanding of your proposed logline: However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict). Is this close to what you are trying to say? To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why dRead more
Hi phatiusmcdoogal,
Below is my understanding of your proposed logline:
However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict).
Is this close to what you are trying to say?
To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why does the convict need escorting?) a death row inmate while his (calculated ward? What is that?) prosecutors are determined to avenge a man they claim he killed.
I hope this helps
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Maybe you mean: To impress his older brother, an impulsive teen goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency.
Maybe you mean:
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When their quiet friend kills himself at kick-ons to prove he’s a sick cunt, some aussie larrikins must bring him back to life
I would replace the initial "their" with "a" as we don't know who the "their" is referring to
I would replace the initial “their” with “a” as we don’t know who the “their” is referring to
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